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I tried,
Falling apart deep inside...

Pain's resounding
my heart is pounding...

After you left,
I thought of my own death...

but you came back,
I haven't kept track...

time stands still,
and no one has healed...
©2007-2009 ~blackkat08
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I wrote this one on the fly... 3 minutes I think... so please tell me what you think!! I'm always up for some good critisism...

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:iconpyrothepoet:
very nice, and i think that it show some strong feeling for the short time it took to write it.

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:iconblackkat08:
thank you!! I'm glad that I conveyed the feeling well enough for you to see it.

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I believe we all suffer, and when we put our heart and soul into something: it becomes our talent. (if we want it badly enough) When we convey our talent with our pains; it turns into pure and unrivled beauty. -Misty (I made it up... its my personal quote
:iconcrimsonpetal13:
sadly i have felt that way. very powerful.
:iconblackkat08:
i'm sorry that you have had to feel this way... I know it hurts... trust me... hopefully things are getting better!!! :)

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I believe we all suffer, and when we put our heart and soul into something: it becomes our talent. (if we want it badly enough) When we convey our talent with our pains; it turns into pure and unrivled beauty. -Misty (I made it up... its my personal quote

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